Firstly i would like to say that i personally feel that my group and I have worked our utmost in producing our group video and also our individual ancillary products.
However in retrospect i think that after audience feedback there could have been a few things that i may have included to improve my complete product.
- Firstly i think that i should have tried harder to play with the opacity levels of Tyler in 'Fix You'. The reason for this is that it will further helped my audience understand that Tyler was supposed to be an angelic like figure and not an actual human being.
- Another thing i might change looking back is the important music element that is Tyler's guitar. I would have loved to include a shot of him playing the guitar. This would have been more entertaining for my audience. It would have also lead audience to think of an acoustic guitar to be synonymous with Tyler and continued the running theme of the guitar along with my digipak and my advert.
- Finally i think that In relation to audience feedback i could have tried harder to make the ending of the video clearer for audiences to understand the message as although they understood the narrative they were a little disillusioned by Tyler's character.
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